English-Uzbek Spiritual Proofreading -- 2

I have a set of English self-help manuscripts that have already been translated into Uzbek. Before publication, the text needs a careful proofread to be sure every idea still carries the same devotional warmth and motivational clarity as the original. The work involves: • Reading the Uzbek draft against the English source to spot mistranslations, tone shifts, or missing sections. • Polishing grammar, punctuation, spelling, and flow so it sounds naturally Uzbek while retaining the uplifting, devotional style. • Using Track Changes in Microsoft Word so I can see every adjustment. The full manuscript package is ready to share as soon as we start, and I would like the final, clean copy returned within a month. A short sample edit (one or two pages) will help confirm we are on the same wavelength before moving through the remaining chapters.